Jojo
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jojo
Feb 22, 2010 16:04:10 GMT -5
Post by Jojo on Feb 22, 2010 16:04:10 GMT -5
Name:jojo Race:saiyan Age:15 Sex:male Alignment: Good Hair Color:black Hair Style:spiky hair Eye Color:brown/black Height:1:80 Body Appearance:a very musclear boy whit very strong and tall legs.he is almost just as mesclear as a boar.
he has a very large tail,it is much taller then the regulars. he looks facial like a true prided saiyan,and he feels his face is holy. Clothes:a saiyan armor Ki/Energy Color:blue Quote:dont mess whit me!
Story:he is the grandson of the son of trunks he looks alot like him and is a prince too weird is that he has wished himself a full saiyan when he was little. he is very strong and know that he is a prince his best friend when he was little was the little namekian Kenito he died natural and cant get wished back anymore. since then he trains allone but a evil person killed his parents but after that jojo killed the man in his anger since then he lives alone in a gigantic cave on new vegeta sometimes he goes outsied the town.after that he travels back in time.
he has a very large lust for fight and is cocky.one time he fighted a super saiyan king,when the king almost kills him he goes into his oozaru form by seeing the moon and almost kills the king .whit that the king allows him to stay into his own trused cave.but he didnt wanted it and getted a spae pod to send him to earth,but the space pod crashed on earth.
Starting Location:Earth
Techniques[/u] kamehameha kaioken
Special Notes[/u]
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jojo
Feb 22, 2010 17:31:43 GMT -5
Post by General Drake on Feb 22, 2010 17:31:43 GMT -5
Name:jojo Race:saiyan Age:15 Sex:male Alignment: Good Hair Color:black Hair Style:spiky hair Eye Color:brown/black Height:1:80 Body Appearance:a very musclear boy whit very strong and tall legs.he is almost just as mesclear as a boar. he has a very large tail,it is much taller then the rregulars. Clothes:a saiyan armor Ki/Energy Color:blue Quote:dont mess whit me! Story:he is the grandson of the son of trunks he look alot like him and is a pronce too weird is that he has wisjed himself a full saiyan when he was little. he is very strong andknow that he is a prince his best friend when he was little was the little namekiankenito he died natural and cant get wished back anymore. since then he trains allone but a evil person killed his parents but after that jojo killed the man in his anger since then he lives alone in a gigantic cave on new vegeta sometimes he goes outsied the town.after that he travels back in time. he has a very large lust for fight and is cocky.one time he fighted a super saiyan king,when the king almost kills him he goes into his oozaru form by seeing the moon and almost kills the king .whit that the king allows him to stay into his own trused cave. Starting Location:vegeta Techniques[/u]destructo disc kamehameha kaioken Special Notes[/u] [/quote]All right, here's what you need to do to get thish accepted... 1. Capitalize 2. I'm not so sure about this grandson of the son of trunks thing, since that ties in to canon characters, and doesn't really fit with the 1000 years since the shows ended business... especially with this completely random time travel thing you threw in there. 3. You're gonna need just a little better... grammar? ...because it's hard to work out what's going on in your story with the way stuff sort of spills in to each other. 4. Lose a technique - you start with 2 (I recommend dropping Destructo Disk, which you can learn most easily in a dojo). I hate turning people down, but I can't accept characters unless the creators of those characters can type moderately well or better. D=
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Jojo
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jojo
Feb 23, 2010 3:35:40 GMT -5
Post by Jojo on Feb 23, 2010 3:35:40 GMT -5
modified,and he isnt cannon,it is just i like trunks and here you dont have canon so...
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jojo
Feb 23, 2010 8:18:12 GMT -5
Post by Nachi on Feb 23, 2010 8:18:12 GMT -5
Question: How old are you?
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Jojo
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jojo
Feb 23, 2010 8:59:26 GMT -5
Post by Jojo on Feb 23, 2010 8:59:26 GMT -5
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jojo
Feb 23, 2010 14:06:21 GMT -5
Post by Nachi on Feb 23, 2010 14:06:21 GMT -5
M'kay, I remember a few years back most of the new members in my old DBZ sites were 13/14/15-ish... I guess I should quit being so tight and get this accepted. Name:jojo Race:saiyan Age:15 Sex:male Alignment: Good Hair Color:black Hair Style:spiky hair Eye Color:brown/black Height:1:80 Body Appearance:a very musclear boy whit very strong and tall legs.he is almost just as mesclear as a boar. he has a very large tail,it is much taller then the regulars. he looks facial like a true prided saiyan,and he feels his face is holy. Clothes:a saiyan armor Ki/Energy Color:blue Quote:dont mess whit me! Story:he is the grandson of the son of trunks he looks alot like him and is a prince too weird is that he has wished himself a full saiyan when he was little. he is very strong and know that he is a prince his best friend when he was little was the little namekian Kenito he died natural and cant get wished back anymore. since then he trains allone but a evil person killed his parents but after that jojo killed the man in his anger since then he lives alone in a gigantic cave on new vegeta sometimes he goes outsied the town.after that he travels back in time. he has a very large lust for fight and is cocky.one time he fighted a super saiyan king,when the king almost kills him he goes into his oozaru form by seeing the moon and almost kills the king .whit that the king allows him to stay into his own trused cave. Starting Location:vegeta Techniques[/u] kamehameha kaioken Special Notes[/u] [/quote]This looks cool, though the King of all Saiyans isn't really defeatable by someone of any of our levels right now. Though to be honest... there could be some saiyan King of some part of the planet and you kicked their butt. So, right... I'll accept, but if you wanna learn DDisk, it may be easiest to write in about getting a spacepod, and being sent to Earth, then change your starter location to Earth. You can learn DDisk in Hercule City's Dojo. You can't be on the Grand Kai's Planet, unfortunately... since you haven't died or teleported there.
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Jojo
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jojo
Feb 24, 2010 3:09:18 GMT -5
Post by Jojo on Feb 24, 2010 3:09:18 GMT -5
ok modified
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jojo
Feb 24, 2010 5:54:37 GMT -5
Post by Nachi on Feb 24, 2010 5:54:37 GMT -5
Name:jojo Race:saiyan Age:15 Sex:male Alignment: Good Hair Color:black Hair Style:spiky hair Eye Color:brown/black Height:1:80 Body Appearance:a very musclear boy whit very strong and tall legs.he is almost just as mesclear as a boar. he has a very large tail,it is much taller then the regulars. he looks facial like a true prided saiyan,and he feels his face is holy. Clothes:a saiyan armor Ki/Energy Color:blue Quote:dont mess whit me! Story:he is the grandson of the son of trunks he looks alot like him and is a prince too weird is that he has wished himself a full saiyan when he was little. he is very strong and know that he is a prince his best friend when he was little was the little namekian Kenito he died natural and cant get wished back anymore. since then he trains allone but a evil person killed his parents but after that jojo killed the man in his anger since then he lives alone in a gigantic cave on new vegeta sometimes he goes outsied the town.after that he travels back in time. he has a very large lust for fight and is cocky.one time he fighted a super saiyan king,when the king almost kills him he goes into his oozaru form by seeing the moon and almost kills the king .whit that the king allows him to stay into his own trused cave.but he didnt wanted it and getted a spae pod to send him to earth,but the space pod crashed on earth. Starting Location:Earth Techniques[/u] kamehameha kaioken Special Notes[/u] [/quote]Accepted
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Jojo
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jojo
Mar 13, 2010 8:51:52 GMT -5
Post by Jojo on Mar 13, 2010 8:51:52 GMT -5
i have a quistion...can i chanhge my kaio-ken into sprit bomb?
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jojo
Mar 13, 2010 9:40:56 GMT -5
Post by Nachi on Mar 13, 2010 9:40:56 GMT -5
You should try checking out tech descriptions.
Your karma is zero, so a Spirit Bomb would never work. Your character just can't gather the energy.
Same applies to how I've seen you use Kaioken in the past, but I let it go because Kaioken has a pretty complex design here. But if you get in the tourney and start using your Kaioken, you're gonna need to make sure it gets used properly. Have someone help tell you what it's doing if necessary... your opponent ought to know how it works since all the other dead people are pretty experienced with the rules of thish site.
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Jojo
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jojo
Mar 13, 2010 11:33:09 GMT -5
Post by Jojo on Mar 13, 2010 11:33:09 GMT -5
ok can i change it cuz it is too difficult and i think it never work...but can i change it for...the wolf fang fist?
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jojo
Mar 13, 2010 11:36:44 GMT -5
Post by Nachi on Mar 13, 2010 11:36:44 GMT -5
ok can i change it cuz it is too difficult and i think it never work...but can i change it for...the wolf fang fist? Sure
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Jojo
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jojo
Mar 13, 2010 12:03:30 GMT -5
Post by Jojo on Mar 13, 2010 12:03:30 GMT -5
thanks
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