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Post by Reiji on Feb 4, 2010 14:37:27 GMT -5
Name:Android #1 Race:Android Age:17 Sex:Male Alignment:Neutral(for now) Hair Color:Light grey(its not perfect white) Hair Style:It's mid hair emo style:  Eye Color:Blue Height:1,70 meters Body Appearance:He is athletic and have no sight of much musculature but don't be fooled by appeareance.  Clothes:A black suit made from skin  Ki/Energy Color:Black Quote:"Don't stay in my way and you will live!" Story:1000 years have passed since the androids were exterminated, but they wasn't destroyed forever.In a dark night when it was raining and thunders were hitting the ground at the destroyed lab of Dr.Gero. A thunder hitted the Main machinery activating it.The machine started to repair itself and all the laboratory.Afther that he beggined to restore all of its files in order to become the place where androids are born.Afther completing his data's he started The project:Androids(next generation)And concepted the first android: number 1 but also the machine call him the original one. He designed him as a very capable and smart android who will lead the androids at victory.The primary attributes of him are:Speed and skill but his have some power too.But this project is seems that was created before Dr. Gero to dye but wasn't finished.He only maked the first android of the next generation.That means he wanted to create him later in order to crush the Z fighters but he didn't complete his programing.So the "Original" have his own personality and decisions.This will make him a very strong opponent having his own desires.So the android was made and now he will act:But what path will he chose?Good or Evil? Starting Location:Dr Gero Secret Lab Techniques[/u] Name:Android programing Type:Programing Description:Its the programing made for androids by the computer where they receive data's. Special Effects:The program allow them to read opponent moves and use this in their advantage. Defects: This program activates only afther 20 turns of battle(the turns are decreasing whit five for every transformation.And at the final one with to:remaining at 3 turns.) Name:Android shield Type:Shield Description:A blue Ki shield is surrounding the opponent. Special Effects:It's protecting him from any type of attack blocking it instantly. Defects:It could be used only 1 time per battle.(the shield using is rising with 1 at every transformation) Special Notes[/u] He have very much speed and it's very smart.Also he have much power but he have skill too, but not too much yet.[/quote] As of Right now im going to have to Deny this Character. You can only start off with One Custom Technique and i also am having a hard time understanding your grammar which will make it tough for you to RP in the long Run. If you can fix up this Post a little bit i will give it another look. |
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Post by Android #1 on Feb 4, 2010 15:04:50 GMT -5
updated but where are you from?maybe we use 2 diferent english languages(like american and British)
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Post by Nachi on Feb 4, 2010 15:44:36 GMT -5
Name:Android #1 Race:Android Age:17 Sex:Male Alignment:Neutral(for now) Hair Color:Light grey(its not perfect white) Hair Style:It's mid hair emo style: Eye Color:Blue Height:1,70 meters Body Appearance:He is athletic and have no sight of much musculature but don't be fooled by appeareance. Clothes:A black suit made from skin Ki/Energy Color:Black Quote:"Don't stay in my way and you will live!" Story:1000 years have passed since the androids were exterminated, but they weren't destroyed forever.In a dark night when it was raining and thunders were hitting the ground at the destroyed lab of Dr.Gero. A thunder hitted the Main machinery activating it.The machine started to repair itself and all the laboratory.Afther that he beggined to restore all of its files in order to become the place where androids are born.Afther completing his data's he started The project:Androids(next generation)And concepted the first android: number 1 but also the machine call him the original one. He designed him as a very capable and smart android who will lead the androids at victory.The primary attributes of him are:Speed and skill but his have some power too.But this project is seems that was created before Dr. Gero to dye but wasn't finished.He only maked the first android of the next generation.That means he wanted to create him later in order to crush the Z fighters but he didn't complete his programing.So the "Original" have his own personality and decisions.This will make him a very strong opponent having his own desires.So the android was made and now he will act:But what path will he chose?Good or Evil? Starting Location:Dr Gero Secret Lab Tying in Dr. Gero with some android nobody's heard of is risky, also another problem is that the original 'Android #1' is from way before Dragon Ball... going by the way things were in the Red Ribbon Army, this would be Android #21, since they're numbered by order they're created. But I guess I can allow it if you really must have it like that. It'd be better if you thought up your own scientist though instead of Dr. Gero, and go with that... we're cautious about using characters that are actually from the shows in people's stories, you see. [/u] Name:Android programing Type:Programing Description:Its the programing made for androids by the computer where they receive data's. Special Effects:The program allow them to read opponent moves and use this in their advantage. Defects: This program activates only afther 20 turns of battle(the turns are decreasing whit five for every transformation.And at the final one with to:remaining at 3 turns.)[/quote]This I can't allow, because it's way too vague. You can do something like this if you want, but you'll have to tell us more... precisely... what it does... One idea is that this could allow you to automatically avoid or stop any two techniques you've seen before in the same battle. That tells us exactly what it means... it makes you avoid or stop techniques. [/u] He have very much speed and it's very smart.Also he have much power but he have skill too, but not too much yet.[/quote] If you wanna do stuff like that, you're going in to stats... Basically, Androids start like this... Speed +0.25 But from your description, you could make this...? Speed +0.25 Power +0.2 Skill +0.1 Strength -0.1 Senses -0.1 Endurance -0.1 You've read about how we use Power Levels, right? You multiply your post count by a number. You start at x1, but your stats change it... so for what's up there, you'd have x1.25 speed... with 2000 posts that's 2500, and you compare that to other people's speeds. |
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Post by Android #1 on Feb 4, 2010 15:50:26 GMT -5
umm but those androids are gone.This is the next generation thats why is android #1.
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Post by Nachi on Feb 4, 2010 15:51:36 GMT -5
Makes sense... okay, go ahead with that then.
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Post by Android #1 on Feb 5, 2010 12:10:00 GMT -5
Name:Android #1 Race:Android Age:17 Sex:Male Alignment:Neutral(for now) Hair Color:Light grey(its not perfect white) Hair Style:It's mid hair emo style: Eye Color:Blue Height:1,70 meters Body Appearance:He is athletic and have no sight of much musculature but don't be fooled by appeareance. Clothes:A black suit made from skin Ki/Energy Color:Black Quote:"Don't stay in my way and you will live!" Story:1000 years have passed since the androids were exterminated, but they weren't destroyed forever.In a dark night when it was raining and thunders were hitting the ground at the destroyed lab of Dr.Gero. A thunder hitted the Main machinery activating it.The machine started to repair itself and all the laboratory.Afther that he beggined to restore all of its files in order to become the place where androids are born.Afther completing his data's he started The project:Androids(next generation)And concepted the first android: number 1 but also the machine call him the original one. He designed him as a very capable and smart android who will lead the androids at victory.The primary attributes of him are:Speed and skill but his have some power too.But this project is seems that was created before Dr. Gero to dye but wasn't finished.He only maked the first android of the next generation.That means he wanted to create him later in order to crush the Z fighters but he didn't complete his programing.So the "Original" have his own personality and decisions.This will make him a very strong opponent having his own desires.So the android was made and now he will act:But what path will he chose?Good or Evil? Starting Location:Dr Gero Secret Lab Techniques Name:Android programing Type:Programing Description:Its the programing made for androids by the computer where they receive data's. Special Effects:The program allow them to read opponent moves and use this in their advantage.But this advantage is rising from tranformation to transsformation and at the base the advantage is very little. Defects:It is useless if the oponent have double of his speed b] Special Notes[/b][/u] He have very much speed and it's very smart.Also he have much power but he have skill too, but not too much yet. |
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Post by Android #1 on Feb 5, 2010 12:13:17 GMT -5
sorry to post this again but i had a error taht deleted my original post and i made some updates at the android programing.because was too weak
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Post by Nachi on Feb 5, 2010 12:50:18 GMT -5
Your tech is still way too vague... what 'advantage'?
And you're missing the point with your Special Notes.
Plus, this is very frustrating now that the first post here isn't your profile. =/
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