Son Dayar, Saiyan

[Son Dayar]

Name:Son Dayar
Race:1/4 Saiyan
Age:17
Sex:Male
Alignment:Good
Hair Color:Black
Hair Style:Afro
Eye Color:Black
Height:5'4
Body Appearance:Muscular, Dark skinhas the muscular build of Goku, has many scratches on arms Afro looks as if it is made of the finest cotton (cant think of anything better)
Clothes: Goku Pants, Goku Boots, Goku Belt, Arm Bandages
Ki/Energy Color:Red Lightning
Quote:"Ever think about suicide?"

Story: Son Dayar is the great-great-great grandson of Goku Jr. He has the face of Goku and the attitude of Bardock. As the Son bloodline got shorter, the crazier the family got. While Son Dayar was 12 years old, he extracted some DNA from Goku Jr.'s remains and put it into himself. Some people have called him the strongest 1/4 Saiyan ever, but he says he has a very long way to go. Alot of you will disagree with those people, but wait til' you see his strategies. Master Roshi changed Son Dayar after his intense training to almost fully understand the power of the Kamehameha.

Starting Location:Earth

Techniques:Break Storm, Dodonpa Ray

Special Notes: Skill: 1.0x
Endurance: 1.25x
Senses:1.0x
Speed:1.4x
Ki Power:.6x
Strength: 1.0x

[Shiro]

Mar 22, 2010 21:09:59 GMT -5 Son Dayar said:

Name:Son Dayar
Race:1/4 Saiyan
Age:17
Sex:Male
Alignment:Nuetral
Hair Color:Black
Hair Style:Afro
Eye Color:Black
Height:5'4
Body Appearance:Muscular, Dark skin. has the muscular build of Goku, has many scratches on arms Afro looks as if it is made of the finest cotton (cant think of anything better)
Clothes: Goku Pants, Goku Boots, Goku Belt, Arm Bandages
Ki/Energy Color:Red Lightning
Quote:"Ever think about suicide?"

Story: Son Dayar is the great-great-great grandson of Goku Jr. He has the face of Goku and the attitude of Bardock. As the Son bloodline got shorter, the crazier the family got. While Son Dayar was 12 years old, he extracted some DNA from Goku Jr.'s remains and put it into himself. Some people have called him the strongest 1/4 Saiyan ever, but he says he has a very long way to go. Alot of you will disagree with those people, but wait til' you see his strategies.

Starting Location:Earth

Techniques:Break Storm, Dodonpa Ray

Special Notes: I want to have a power level in between 2400 and 4000

Good enough for me. Unfortunately you'll have to start at 2000 posts like everyone else, but if you post enough and get in enough fights, you'll get to 3000 soon enough.

Accepted.

Also, if you could modify your first post to show the fixes that'd be appreciated.

[Son Dayar]

Skill: 1.0x
Endurance: 1.25x
Senses:1.0x
Speed:1.4x
Ki Power:.6x
Strength: 1.0x

[Shiro]

Mar 22, 2010 21:44:56 GMT -5 Son Dayar said:

Skill: 1.0x
Endurance: 1.25x
Senses:1.0x
Speed:1.4x
Ki Power:.6x
Strength: 1.0x

Accepted, now please add this and your tech and appearance changes to your first post.

[Son Dayar]

Skill: 1.3x
Endurance: 1.25x
Senses:1.0x
Speed:1.4x
Ki Power:1.6x
Strength: 1.0x

Stat changes...

[Son Dayar]

Name:Dayar's Kamehameha
Type:Beam
Description:Is a Kamehameha, but Red with a lightning aura around it
Special Effects:Electricutes the opponent; Paralyzes for 3 post
Defects:Takes a lot of energy


*Will trade this with Kamehameha

[Reiji]

Mar 31, 2010 21:54:28 GMT -5 Son Dayar said:

Name:Dayar's Kamehameha
Type:Beam
Description:Is a Kamehameha, but Red with a lightning aura around it
Special Effects:Electricutes the opponent
Defects:Takes a lot of energy


*Will trade this with Kamehameha

Can't do this. You don't have enough Stars to have a Custom, and you can make it just a Cosmetic Change without the Electrocuting part without making a new technique

[Shiro]

Mar 31, 2010 22:08:05 GMT -5 Reiji said:

Mar 31, 2010 21:54:28 GMT -5 Son Dayar said:

Name:Dayar's Kamehameha
Type:Beam
Description:Is a Kamehameha, but Red with a lightning aura around it
Special Effects:Electricutes the opponent
Defects:Takes a lot of energy


*Will trade this with Kamehameha

Can't do this. You don't have enough Stars to have a Custom, and you can make it just a Cosmetic Change without the Electrocuting part without making a new technique

Actually, he can make as many customs as he wants. He just won't be able to learn any of them until he has enough stars, or forgets one of his current attacks.

That being said, your special effect is too vague. By electrocuting, does that mean it paralyzes them while they're being hit, screws up their muscle control, leaves them stunned for the remainder of the post, what?