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Post by Shuni Kagara on Feb 25, 2010 21:32:10 GMT -5
Name:Shuni Kagara
Race:Android
Age:19
Sex:Female
Alignment: Neutral, Leaning Towards Good
Hair Color:Darkened Red
Hair Style:Extremely long, curled up at the end with a large bow in the middle of it. Colored black.
Eye Color:Red
Height:Five feet, ten inches.
Body Appearance:She stands a stern five foot almost six feet tall, with tan skin and a grimace smile showing a lot of pain. Her eyes a deep crimson red, with a deep embrace of hope but desperation to find something. Her hair easily covering her face at times she never seems to mind it as if she could see with a blindfold on, her right leg carrying a long deepened scar like tattoo of a hermit looking dragon.
Her right arm, seems to show a shiny metal between her thumb and finger set with a long winding and unseen tattoo pouring up her arm and onto her shoulder.
Clothes:Wears a basic pair of blue jeans, torn at both the knees and tattered coloring. Sporting a long sleeved black shirt, two cuts on the right sleeve allowing some of her skin to be shown and a basic pair of black shoes sporting blue laces.
Usually wears a blue jacket over her shirt, something like trunks but without all that fancy crap. Torn across the back and the side, even though her clothes look a bit raggy she seems to not really care about her personal appearance for the time being anyway.
She also wields a pair of ton-fa, which are attached to her pants. Seen only using them for comical effect.
Ki/Energy Color:Variant's of the colors of red.
Quote:"......."
Story:She was created nearly twenty years ago, by a caring scientist named Doctor Genma. It was his idea to create a robotic being able to defend people that needed it, instead of people dieing a single android could be used to fight and if needed kill a opposing force and if it was injured simply repair it. During the years under his guidance, she fought various small sided wars and shifty fights and gained massive amounts of experience doing so. She was already programmed how to fight, using not only the basics but her own natural flexibility and fluent movements to easily out run and out maneuver enemies. She was programmed to learn and to learn from defeat, she was defeated multiple times by stronger individuals and heavy fire from multiple types of guns. This simply adding to her already enhanced knowledge about this world and what it had to offer.
However after eighteen years of being used for this purpose, Doctor Genma's lab was found and quickly overrun by enemy soldiers. Using what little time he had, he set a timer on Shuni's holding tank to not only release her in one years time but to erase her memory and give her a more humanoid type personality. It had been nearly 18 years before her tank was opened early by one month of time by some local villagers exploring the cave. Her memory gone, replaced with a humanoid personality she spent one year with the villagers. Learning everything she could, she left seeking her own life.
Starting Location:Earth
Techniques[/u]
Hate Rush
A wild combo of pure bestial instinct! Attacks are powerful and chaotic... and due to the chaotic nature of this combo, it becomes extremely difficult to defend against, as you don't know what's about to come next!
Note that due to the effects of rage, this attack gets boosted slightly the more the user hates their victim.
Soul Punisher
A technique where your speed is boosted greatly while you appear in front of and behind the opponent delivering a sequence of physical attacks designed to catch your opponent off guard due to your speed.
The finish move is a compacted ball of ki, which is guaranteed to hit if the final hit before it landed. Charging before the combo increases the power of the ki ball.
Special Notes[/u]
Is unable to speak for very long, due to her voice box being highly damaged. This will last intill she repairs it or is repaired by someone, same for damaged looking body and clothes. Eventually, she will fix her self up xD
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Post by Ares on Feb 25, 2010 21:37:54 GMT -5
Name:Shuni Kagara Race:Android Age:19 Sex:Female Alignment: Neutral, Leaning Towards Good Hair Color:Darkened Red Hair Style:Extremely long, curled up at the end with a large bow in the middle of it. Colored black. Eye Color:Red Height:Five feet, ten inches. Body Appearance:She stands a stern five foot almost six feet tall, with tan skin and a grimace smile showing a lot of pain. Her eyes a deep crimson red, with a deep embrace of hope but desperation to find something. Her hair easily covering her face at times she never seems to mind it as if she could see with a blindfold on, her right leg carrying a long deepened scar like tattoo of a hermit looking dragon. Her right arm, seems to show a shiny metal between her thumb and finger set with a long winding and unseen tattoo pouring up her arm and onto her shoulder. Clothes:Wears a basic pair of blue jeans, torn at both the knees and tattered coloring. Sporting a long sleeved black shirt, two cuts on the right sleeve allowing some of her skin to be shown and a basic pair of black shoes sporting blue laces. Usually wears a blue jacket over her shirt, something like trunks but without all that fancy crap. Torn across the back and the side, even though her clothes look a bit raggy she seems to not really care about her personal appearance for the time being anyway. She also wields a pair of ton-fa, which are attached to her pants. Seen only using them for comical effect. Ki/Energy Color:Variant's of the colors of red. Quote:"......." Story:She was created nearly twenty years ago, by a caring scientist named Doctor Genma. It was his idea to create a robotic being able to defend people that needed it, instead of people dieing a single android could be used to fight and if needed kill a opposing force and if it was injured simply repair it. During the years under his guidance, she fought various small sided wars and shifty fights and gained massive amounts of experience doing so. She was already programmed how to fight, using not only the basics but her own natural flexibility and fluent movements to easily out run and out maneuver enemies. She was programmed to learn and to learn from defeat, she was defeated multiple times by stronger individuals and heavy fire from multiple types of guns. This simply adding to her already enhanced knowledge about this world and what it had to offer. However after eighteen years of being used for this purpose, Doctor Genma's lab was found and quickly overrun by enemy soldiers. Using what little time he had, he set a timer on Shuni's holding tank to not only release her in one years time but to erase her memory and give her a more humanoid type personality. It had been nearly 18 years before her tank was opened early by one month of time by some local villagers exploring the cave. Her memory gone, replaced with a humanoid personality she spent one year with the villagers. Learning everything she could, she left seeking her own life. Starting Location:Earth Techniques [/u] Hate Rush A wild combo of pure bestial instinct! Attacks are powerful and chaotic... and due to the chaotic nature of this combo, it becomes extremely difficult to defend against, as you don't know what's about to come next! Note that due to the effects of rage, this attack gets boosted slightly the more the user hates their victim. Soul Punisher A technique where your speed is boosted greatly while you appear in front of and behind the opponent delivering a sequence of physical attacks designed to catch your opponent off guard due to your speed. The finish move is a compacted ball of ki, which is guaranteed to hit if the final hit before it landed. Charging before the combo increases the power of the ki ball. Special Notes[/u] Is unable to speak for very long, due to her voice box being highly damaged. This will last intill she repairs it or is repaired by someone, same for damaged looking body and clothes. Eventually, she will fix her self up xD[/quote]Accepted, welcome. Noice character. ~Caj (the person who plays Nachi) |
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Feb 26, 2010 17:01:55 GMT -5
Can I replace Hate Rush with After Image or Galactic Gunfire, and eh can I start with fly if you don't already due to the androids not actually flying but you know having the built in motor thing to let them fly.
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Post by Reiji on Feb 26, 2010 17:39:54 GMT -5
Can I replace Hate Rush with After Image or Galactic Gunfire, and eh can I start with fly if you don't already due to the androids not actually flying but you know having the built in motor thing to let them fly. You can switch Hate Rush for Galactic Gunfire but After Image and Flying are passive abilities you learn at 2300 and 2500 Posts Respectively |
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Post by Shiro on Feb 28, 2010 0:31:25 GMT -5
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Feb 28, 2010 18:01:25 GMT -5
Can I change
Skill - 1.0x
Sense - 1.05x
Endurance - 1.0x
Speed - 1.25x
Strength - .95x
Energy Power - 1.0x
to
Skill - 1.0x
Sense - 1.1x
Endurance - .90x
Speed - 1.50x
Strength - .85x
Energy Power - .90x
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Post by Nachi on Feb 28, 2010 18:04:14 GMT -5
Can I change Skill - 1.0x Sense - 1.05x Endurance - 1.0x Speed - 1.25x Strength - .95x Energy Power - 1.0x to Skill - 1.0x Sense - 1.1x Endurance - .90x Speed - 1.50x Strength - .85x Energy Power - .90x Since you're such a new character, this ish accepted. |
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 2, 2010 16:41:26 GMT -5
Can I get this?
Name:Absorption Field
Type:Defense\Attack
Description:Shuni begins to focus her energy throughout her body, giving it a vacuum like energy wave.
Special Effects:While this move is active, any time Shuni touches her target or is touched by them, some of there energy is absorbed and added to her already growing power. This move only lasts 2 posts. This move can also be used to absorb a single energy attack and negate it.
Admin decides how much power was absorbed based on how long the body part touched and there current power.
Defects:This move takes a lot to perform once, let alone twice. Every time this move is used in battle, she loses 0.1 on any stat the target absorbed decides in till the end of the fight or she heals with a senzu bean. This is limited to once a day and can cause massive damage if overused.
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Post by Reiji on Mar 2, 2010 16:45:47 GMT -5
Can I get this? Name:Absorption Field Type:Defense\Attack Description:Shuni begins to focus her energy throughout her body, giving it a vacuum like energy wave. Special Effects:While this move is active, any time Shuni touches her target or is touched by them, some of there energy is absorbed and added to her already growing power. This move only lasts 2 posts. This move can also be used to absorb a single energy attack and negate it. Admin decides how much power was absorbed based on how long the body part touched and there current power. Defects:This move takes a lot to perform once, let alone twice. Every time this move is used in battle, she loses 0.1 on any stat the target absorbed decides in till the end of the fight or she heals with a senzu bean. This is limited to once a day and can cause massive damage if overused. I think this might be overpowered |
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 2, 2010 16:46:20 GMT -5
I think I can fix that.
Add to defects instead of 0.1 off any stat for the fight, it cuts my speed in half for the rest of the fight or something xD
I'm not good at making custom moves.
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Post by Nachi on Mar 3, 2010 8:01:43 GMT -5
Naw, the problem is that it seems so automatic and unstoppable. Absorption is more easy to accept when it's something that can miss.
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:19:52 GMT -5
It can miss, all they need to do is dodge.
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:21:07 GMT -5
Plus I need to touch them longer then a few milliseconds, I gotta do like a grapple or something to make it even stay long enough to absorb. If they hit me big deal, they arn't gonna grab me, if they do there just stupid.
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:21:34 GMT -5
I already understand everytime I try it, they are gonna dodge no matter what anyway.
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Post by Nachi on Mar 3, 2010 19:39:15 GMT -5
But the way you described it was an aura... the best way to use it would be as a counter when someone attacks in some way, thus making it unavoidable because the opponent put themselves close.
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:49:19 GMT -5
Name:Absorption Field
Type:Trap
Description: This is Shuni's Ultimate move. Shuni quickly focuses her energy throughout her body, to produce a extremely powerful energy vacuum in her hands capable of absorbing massive amounts of energy and power. She then waits for the moment the target is stupid enough to position themselves, where she can get a strong grip and hold them down while she absorbs there energy. During this time, Shuni becomes slightly weaker due to the strain.
Special Effects:Absorbs the targets energy and power, once caught in the move. This is only a counter attack and is not used for offensive purposes. This is a permanent post boost in a since, but does not remove the targets posts. Since it only absorbs there current power and energy which can be regained through rest or senzu beans. This move can also be used, to absorb a single Energy attack gaining the excess energy of it for a few posts.
Defects:Can only be performed once on a target, when overused this move can cause Shuni to quickly tire out and even sometimes die or lose every last drop of her energy for a short while.
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Post by Nachi on Mar 3, 2010 19:52:45 GMT -5
Name:Absorption Field Type:Trap Description: This is Shuni's Ultimate move, due to it usually leaving the target unable to continue. Shuni quickly focuses her energy throughout her body, to produce a extremely powerful energy vacuum in her hands capable of absorbing massive amounts of energy and power. She then waits for the moment the target is stupid enough to position themselves, where she can get a strong grip and hold them down while she absorbs there energy. During this time, Shuni becomes slightly weaker due to the strain. Special Effects:Absorbs the targets energy and power, once caught in the move. This is only a counter attack and is not used for offensive purposes. Defects:Can only be performed once on a target, when overused this move can cause Shuni to quickly tire out and even sometimes die or lose every last drop of her energy. How about... for every post you're able to spend 'preparing' (focusing or some other similar action), you can drain a person for that long when you spring your trap? I'm not too comfortable if you get a complete lock on someone and drain them to death due to them becoming weaker leaving them unable to escape... but if there's a way to time it...? Accepted on that edit. No need to repost unless you have something better in mind. Sorry for the troubles with absorption techs. >.< |
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:54:49 GMT -5
The move can't be used to kill, only absorb a ton of energy and power. Due to most people can regain energy, or even over surge me with it. Ending in my death but ya we can put a time on it. Every post I go without attacking or using a energy attack. Aka dodging and only ducking to by time while I charge up my energy. We can make it last that amount of posts or something.
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Post by Nachi on Mar 3, 2010 19:56:14 GMT -5
Weaker players can't oversurge you with it, though. But anyways, I hope it works like that.
We'll see how you use this tech.
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:56:36 GMT -5
30 posts of training to get it right or 20?
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Post by Nachi on Mar 3, 2010 19:57:15 GMT -5
30 posts of training to get it right or 20? 30 Doesn't have to be all about the tech until the last 10, roughly. You can do whatever ya want, effectively. |
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:57:17 GMT -5
I also said when I use the move I get slightly weaker because I have to focus on it. So unless I'm like 2x stronger they can over surge me enough to stun me.
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:57:45 GMT -5
Damn lets see how I should do it xD
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 3, 2010 19:58:22 GMT -5
You'd hate me if I do a bunch of one liners xD Can I just use my fishing post, and put all the posts togather in a single post and label them? I'm ust to doing that xD
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Post by Sakuya on Mar 7, 2010 2:19:51 GMT -5
Absorption Field is OP
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Post by Nachi on Mar 7, 2010 8:46:27 GMT -5
Deny it then until it can be fixed, Reiji.
See what I was meaning, Shuni?
So I checked over the battle, and it seems like you drain too fast. The drain rate needs to be slowed down to a moderate level and nothing more.
Until then, your tech is suspended.
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Post by Nachi on Mar 7, 2010 10:57:50 GMT -5
*edits last post*
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Post by Shuni Kagara on Mar 7, 2010 19:53:21 GMT -5
How is it over powered, really I even mention it was slowly draining his energy bit by bit. I didn't even drain a quarter of his energy, all he did was make it over dramatic. He could have still fought, attacked me and even gotten out of the hold anytime during the technique. It wasn't even draining a lot of energy, only a little and at a extremely slow rate. In over all I only drained a maximum of 5-12% energy and only because he didn't fight back when it the hold. He could have head butted me, elbowed me some.
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Post by Nachi on Mar 7, 2010 23:56:05 GMT -5
After all the C-Box talk earlier, I made up my mind.
Suspension removed.
Reiji should've not been so overdramatic.
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Post by Reiji on Mar 8, 2010 8:08:38 GMT -5
The Techniue itself is very vague. If you read it it says
Description: This is Shuni's Ultimate move, due to it usually leaving the target unable to continue.
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